Book Cover about the book the explorer

In reading, we chose a novel of our own choice and I chose The Explorer. This is a really good book to read I recommend it. I think I did really well and please comment if I need to improve on something.

My Sick Cat

  My Sick Cat

Meow!!! “What was that noise?” Liam whispered. “I don't know Blake whispered”. We slowly crept down the hallway and slowly opened the door and we saw my cat sitting there screeching and puking we thought how are we going to help her. “I think we should take her to the vet”. We crept to Blake’s parent's bedroom and we said we are taking Fleur to the vet on our RAZORS. Why did Mum explain? Fleur is sick! And we are really responsible children. So can we please borrow $190.00. We will be back in 1-hour bye! We put Fleur in her cage and I will carry Fleur on my razor! We put the garage door down and scooted to the vet. We sat down and waited until they took us in. We waited a few minutes then they said “Blake and Liam” We took her in a small room and said what was wrong with Fleur. The doctor said, “how long has this been happening”? Said the Doctor “Since we woke up”! We said, “What's wrong with her”? Said the Doctor “She has been puking and sneezing non-stop”. “Take this medicine and put it in her food 1 day”. Ok, thank you very much”. Liam and Blake went back home and feed Fleur her food and put one pill in it. She came over to her bowl and sniffed it then she gobbled it all up and then licked her lips. After that, we told her to go to bed and then she raced to her bed. The next day Fleur was all better. That night we heard a huge MEOW!!! “Oh no,” Liam said. 


In Mr Bell 's reading group we had to make a narrative story. Blake and I came up with the idea about Blake's sick cat and changed it into a narrative story. Please comment if we have done something wrong or something we could add. We hope you enjoy our story.