Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, July 31, 2018
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
I liked the way you gave a lot of information and helpful stuff.
ReplyDeleteYou taught me stuff I didn't know about.
Next time, try better pictures.
Why didn't you do any videos?
I liked the way you that you gave good information.
ReplyDeleteYou taught me things that I didn't know.
Next time, you could add more pictures.
Why didn’t you add videos?
Thank you for your advice I will be shore to do that next time and add a video some time thank you for the comment I will be shore to look at your blog one day.
DeleteHi Liam, I liked the way the way there was lots of information. Did you think about adding a video. Maybe be you could make the writing a little bigger.Overall great post.
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