Kia ora bloggers, Did you know that a Giraffe is the tallest animal in the world? For this task, I had to make an Infomation report on a Giraffe. One interesting fact I found out was that their hearts are at the bottom of their neck and defies gravity and pumps blood up its neck into its brain Imagine that. And they have got the same amount of neck bones as a human but bigger. What is your favourite animal? Do they have interesting facts? Please comment if I need to improve on anything. I think my writing is pretty good, please read and tell me if you found the facts interesting? I would love the feedback. I got the information from a book called Incredible But True Animals by Barbara Toft, that I have and it tells me all about any animal I want. Plus I watched a video that my teachers sent us. Here is the link.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPrWo5pEvyk
Friday, May 1, 2020
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This is an impressive piece of report writing Liam, well done. I like how you have made it very clear and have included lots of information. Keep up the great work.
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