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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, September 10, 2020

Super Scientific Report



For the past week, we have been learning about which powder dissolves in water the quickest he tested solutes such as Citric Acid, Flour Corn, Flour, Sugar, Salt, Sand. .These were the results

WINNER!!! Citric Acid 4:51 mins

2nd Place Sugar 7:27 mins 



Bye Bloggers



Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Carbonated Drinks vs Mentos



Hey Bloggers, For literacy we did an experiment, which was Coke and Mentos. Then a hypothesis was made, It is I think that any carbonated drink will react with Mentos. Then our teacher got some supplies so we could observe different drinks reacting with mentos. We used L&P, Lift, Sprite and Lemonade. The best reaction was the Lemonade because it went the highest and it was pretty cool. This was really fun and I recommend you to do this. Please comment if I need to improve on anything, I would like the  feedback.

Friday, May 8, 2020

Magnificent Mambas



Hey Bloggers, this week in Literacy we are reading a book called Going Solo by Roald Dahl. On the first slide, I have made an Infomation report on a Black Mamba. There is great Infomation in it. On the second slide, I had to come up with an idea to finish the chapter. I think I did really well on both of the tasks. Please comment if I need to improve on anything. Did you know that Black Mamba can go to the speed of 12.5 miles per hour? That's quick! I used slides to present this because it is really easy and cool to use. 

Monday, March 2, 2020

This is just to say...


    Hey Bloggers, We are involved in the get NZ writing. For this task, we had to make a poem about something naughty you have done in the past that you got in trouble for. Please comment if I need to improve on anything or if I could do something better next time. Have you done anything bad before and if you have comment because I am interested about it.



Friday, October 18, 2019

Writing Starters


For Writing every time we start writing with a picture that our teacher Mrs Atkinson makes us do and each day there is a different picture. My favourite one was the Shark Attack. Also, we have to make up our own title. Please comment if I need to improve on anything or if I could do anything better next time.

Tuesday, September 17, 2019

Monday, September 2, 2019

Why korimako should have an amazing class pet


For writing this term we are doing persuasive writing. The topic was what does our class need or what we could have. I chose a class pet because they can keep you company, you can sit next to it every day and kids will actually want to go to school. Please comment If I need to improve anything or if I can do something better next time.

Tuesday, August 20, 2019

Brawn vs Brain Persuasive Writing


For writing this term we have been learning persuasive writing. For this task, we had to make a rubric and start planning our writing. Then we had to start writing are an introduction and we had to do the writing in paragraphs. I chose brawn over brain because I am really sporty. Please comment if I have done something wrong or something I can work on.

Thursday, August 1, 2019

Persuasive Writing Rubric


For Writing, we have been learning persuasive writing. First, we had to make a copy of a rubric that our teacher Mr Sutherland sent us. And then we had to fill the whole thing out and after we did that we are allowed to make it all colourful and pretty. This is still in a work in progress. Please comment if we need to improve anything or we have done something similar.

Friday, July 5, 2019

My Sick Cat

  My Sick Cat

Meow!!! “What was that noise?” Liam whispered. “I don't know Blake whispered”. We slowly crept down the hallway and slowly opened the door and we saw my cat sitting there screeching and puking we thought how are we going to help her. “I think we should take her to the vet”. We crept to Blake’s parent's bedroom and we said we are taking Fleur to the vet on our RAZORS. Why did Mum explain? Fleur is sick! And we are really responsible children. So can we please borrow $190.00. We will be back in 1-hour bye! We put Fleur in her cage and I will carry Fleur on my razor! We put the garage door down and scooted to the vet. We sat down and waited until they took us in. We waited a few minutes then they said “Blake and Liam” We took her in a small room and said what was wrong with Fleur. The doctor said, “how long has this been happening”? Said the Doctor “Since we woke up”! We said, “What's wrong with her”? Said the Doctor “She has been puking and sneezing non-stop”. “Take this medicine and put it in her food 1 day”. Ok, thank you very much”. Liam and Blake went back home and feed Fleur her food and put one pill in it. She came over to her bowl and sniffed it then she gobbled it all up and then licked her lips. After that, we told her to go to bed and then she raced to her bed. The next day Fleur was all better. That night we heard a huge MEOW!!! “Oh no,” Liam said. 


In Mr Bell 's reading group we had to make a narrative story. Blake and I came up with the idea about Blake's sick cat and changed it into a narrative story. Please comment if we have done something wrong or something we could add. We hope you enjoy our story.

 

Friday, May 31, 2019

Infomation report on tigers

https://sites.google.com/marshland.school.nz/tiger/home


In Writing, I have been learning about information reports. I got to choose an animal or natural disaster. I chose a Tiger because they are really cool, fierce and strong. Tiger's is one of my favourite animals. This is work in progress so please comment if I have done something wrong or if there is something I could add.


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