Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, September 16, 2019
The Washing machine
For reading, we had a task the task was to read The Washing Machine and then we had to make a google slide. After that, we had to do the vocabulary and make up a new title for the book and why. Thirdly we had to upgrade the Washing machine. Please comment if I need to improve on anything or something I could do better.
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Hi Liam,
ReplyDeleteYour improved washing machine is really cool. Where is the new title you made for the book? I could not see it! Next time you could explain the purpose of each new feature! Was it thinking of new features for the washing machine?