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Monday, September 2, 2019
Why korimako should have an amazing class pet
For writing this term we are doing persuasive writing. The topic was what does our class need or what we could have. I chose a class pet because they can keep you company, you can sit next to it every day and kids will actually want to go to school. Please comment If I need to improve anything or if I can do something better next time.
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